05-09-2013, 11:00 AM
I disapprove of the new draft here Bel. You have not just cleaned it up, but effectivly reworded and changed several key points.
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I have no problem with rewording things to make it cleaner, but removing things is an issue.
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I prefer the original draft to this. The wording was sound, as was the stucture of it. People were happy with and ready to vote on that draft, but now it is changed completely.
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I have no problem with rewording things to make it cleaner, but removing things is an issue.
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I prefer the original draft to this. The wording was sound, as was the stucture of it. People were happy with and ready to vote on that draft, but now it is changed completely.